I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thanks for sharing your DLO about the Scientific Method. I wonder if you could spend some more time adding detail to your introduction. Yes we are looking at definitions but you haven't made it clear what the definitions are for or why we are learning them.
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Kia ora Teagan
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your DLO about the Scientific Method. I wonder if you could spend some more time adding detail to your introduction. Yes we are looking at definitions but you haven't made it clear what the definitions are for or why we are learning them.
That would improve your post.
- Miss Birtch