Six Sentence Story

This week In writing we where doing a Six Sentence Story.
About creating a character and adding details.
Our focus was on creating sentences.
We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are
1.Our sentence leaves one space between each word.
2. Our sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
3. Our sentence must make sense.
4. Our sentence must have one idea.
I found this easy with making the sentence.
The part I found hard was making the work make sense.

Six sentence story

Once upon a time there was a boy named Bingo Interesting huh.

And he lived somewhere weird In a hole of dirt I told you It was weird.

Bingo has this power that can make earth's light appear and make It night again.

What there's a problem he can't make it light again.

If the light doesn't appear he won't be able to make gardens and cool animals.

Look some birds can help Bingo, they are pulling the sun up YES.