I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how your group shared the work, it is clear that you all contributed to the slideshow in your own way. Why do you think it is important for us to be learning about food preservation in the context of living on Mars? I wonder if you could have shared more about this in your introduction.
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Kia ora Teagan
ReplyDeleteI like how your group shared the work, it is clear that you all contributed to the slideshow in your own way. Why do you think it is important for us to be learning about food preservation in the context of living on Mars? I wonder if you could have shared more about this in your introduction.
- Miss Birtch