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Thursday, 8 March 2018

Door in the wall

In Literacy I have been learning about vocabulary. We looked at a picture and thought critically about it. We used lots of reflective questions to think about the picture.
I found it hard challenging because  we had to think what was in the small door.

One fantastic evening a door popped up In my wall. But it was small. I told my mum she said fiddlesticks you don’t have a small door in your room. So I said  come back and look mum don’t see the door It’s like the door chose me. When mum went out of my room a fairy came in she put pixie dust on me and I shrank. Mum said it's time for dinner I bet mum didn't see me coming down, She was a monster because she was so big and she made me go on the side of the wall. Because mum was running so that made me hit the wall . And then door opened I went in the door and there was a Bunch off golden when I went In the door closed and I was stuck for an hour. Then the fairy came back and got me out of the small door then I went to sleep.



3 comments:

  1. hi teagen can you maybe add more about the story?

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    1. Ok carla i may make a naht part.

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  2. Hi Teagen Nici Here
    I really like how you made a story About a door that was in the wall. Maybe next time you could make your own pitcher of the door in the wall. Where did you find the pitcher of the door in the wall?
    Love to here back
    Blog you later
    Nici

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