I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi :)
ReplyDeleteI really like you Acrostic and I liked how you continued a sentence into another line.
Maybe check your spelling next time (:
Hi Shreya.
Deletethanks for the feedback,
this was fun to make
cool poem snowflakes sound so muchfun
ReplyDeleteThank you Mum,
DeleteIt was so much fun making this,
and it is cool how I made it follow to each line.