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Wednesday, 11 March 2020

Benefits of drinking water

In the past few weeks we have been making a DLO about benefits of drinking water, I had a friend to help me with it her name is shania. We had to create a D.L.O about way we should drink water more.
Here Is me and shania's work

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  1. Anonymous1:15 pm, March 16, 2020

    Hi Teagen!

    I have some feedback for you.
    With the first sentence how you have put
    "the past few week we have been making a DLO"

    Maybe you could put,

    "In the past few weeks we have been making a DLO about benefits of drinking water"

    I hope you liked my feedback!
    From your friend, Shania.

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    1. Anonymous1:19 pm, March 16, 2020

      Thx Shania for the feedback, I am going to change my first sentence.

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