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Tuesday, 17 March 2020

100 word challenge

100 word challenge
Hi today I am going to show you what I was doing in Wānanga, that Is the 100 word challenge It was my first time doing the 100 word challenge, and my teacher said that was good and asked was that my first time and i said yes to the question, whilst she gave me feedback to work on I hope she likes


Word I have to use- Banana Black Heavy Jumped Damaged.

Mhm, Today I am going to wear my banana printed top, with my black shorts I am going to get all the attention, sad thing is I have to move my heavy bed to my Mum’s house because I don't live with her.

Ten minutes later. So as I was moving my bed to the trailer I dropped it and boom its damaged, because I jumped on the trailer and I did not have enough grip. And my bed was so comfy.

That's the end of my story.
By Teagen MG.

Thanks for seeing my work, comment your feedback and what I need to change.

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