Hi today I am going to tell you what I have been doing for the first few days of term 3.
We are writing about if we're a astronaut going to space. I did a paragraph cause i lost ideas near the end, but it makes a good ending, like you need a part 2.
I found it hard to write the story cause, I dont like writing about space.
Heres my work:
Plan
Worried, Sick, Sun, Scared, Moon, Sunset,
Earth moving, Planets, Space suit, Gravity
Earth moving, Planets, Space suit, Gravity
Boom! Bang! The frightening sound passes through the shutter. Captain saying “the engine went out”, while passing the clouds. When another cloud forms around the spaceship, as we break through the sound barrier. Leaving the earth behind. Blood Rushing. Heart Pounding. “Everything is going blurry,” said the captain.
If you have any feedback or what i need to improve please comment it.
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