100 word challenge
Hi today I am going to share with you what I was doing in wananga.
We were making a story that has to be 100 words no more no less.
The photo we had to make a story about a little creek/river in a forest near some mountain, and it look like the photo was took in autumn/fall.
I frigged it would be easy to make the first few sentences.
I got lots of feed back from my teacher and i took that and added what she said on to my story.
Heres my story:
Down through the forest, toward the creek I stood and glared at my reflection on the water.
There was a rock peeking out of the river as a calming breeze came from behind me.
All I could hear was the birds chirping quietly like singing a song from the trees.
While I’m hanging on the tree, watching the sunset off the mountain, the dead silence of dawn put shivers down my spine. As leaves fell from the trees as I sat there feeling empty.
The night came, staring at the moon.
Throughout the night, wind picked up, blowing me off. And here's the photo:
If you want to create a story about it
If you have any feed back or what I need to improve please comment about it.
Have a great day bye!
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