This week My Writing class has been doing a colour poem. My one Is about Blood Red. I tried to make It scream Blood Red. The hard part was thinking of horror words. The fun part was making It in to sentence.
Colour poem
Blood Red helps you look dead with dye and paint.
Haha the sound of screaming sounds like horror.
The smell Its like bloody noses and the moon.
Blood red touch Is like your dying and blood cells.
Me, I think blood red makes me feel like a psychopath and a killer and as cold as a freezing pool.
Mmm the taste of blood Is good and dried blood.
Ideas of blood red Is cool to me and like chiller.
Place of blood red red Is like a haunted house and a killer house.
Hi Teagan Miss Goslin here. Thanks for posting your colour poem. I love the title you gave it. It really represents the colour red doesn't it? The amount of detail you have gone into is great, it makes it interesting for the reader. Next time you could re read to see that your writing makes sense.
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Miss Goslin
Thank you, Miss Goslin, Love the feedback. Next Time I will re-read it.
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