100 Word Challenge

100 Word Challenge
Hi today I am going to share with you what I have been doing in HR.
Were making a story about this photo, the photo has a man, a car and a bear, and the description is humour.
I found it hard to think of the bears personalty.
I figured it would be easy to make the story cause I like writing fiction story's.
If you have any feed back about what i should improve please comment it.
Here the Photo:


Heres my work:

Some people say you should run when you see a bear but not this guy.

But if you're me you would see a regular person but really big and fluffy.

As I go up to him he starts going the other way around the car, like we're playing a game.

All I want is to put him back in his car seat.

Bear: “You can't make me do anything,” 

Guy: “You sure?”

Bear: “Pretty sure you can't stop me” 

Guy: “Ok”

Bear: starts Running around the car again to make the guy puffed.

So enough he gets in the car.

100 Word Challenge

100 word challenge

Hi today I am going to share with you what I was doing in wananga.

We were making a story that has to be 100 words no more no less.

The photo we had to make a story about a little creek/river in a forest near some mountain, and it look like the photo was took in autumn/fall.

I frigged it would be easy to make the first few sentences.

I got lots of feed back from my teacher and i took that and added what she said on to my story.

Heres my story:

Down through the forest, toward the creek I stood and glared at my reflection on the water.

There was a rock peeking out of the river as a calming breeze came from behind me.

All I could hear was the birds chirping quietly like singing a song from the trees.

While I’m hanging on the tree, watching the sunset off the mountain, the dead silence of dawn put shivers down my spine. As leaves fell from the trees as I sat there feeling empty.

The night came, staring at the moon.

Throughout the night, wind picked up, blowing me off. And here's the photo:

If you want to create a story about it

If you have any feed back or what I need to improve please comment about it.

Have a great day bye!

100 word challenge

100 word challenge

Hi today I am going to show you what I was doing in Wānanga, that Is the 100 word challenge It was my first time doing the 100 word challenge, and my teacher said that was good and asked was that my first time and i said yes to the question, whilst she gave me feedback to work on I hope she likes

Word I have to use- Banana Black Heavy Jumped Damaged.

Mhm, Today I am going to wear my banana printed top, with my black shorts I am going to get all the attention, sad thing is I have to move my heavy bed to my Mum’s house because I don't live with her.

Ten minutes later. So as I was moving my bed to the trailer I dropped it and boom its damaged, because I jumped on the trailer and I did not have enough grip. And my bed was so comfy.

That's the end of my story.

By Teagen MG.

Thanks for seeing my work, comment your feedback and what I need to change.