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Monday, 22 June 2020

100 Word Challenge

100 Word Challenge
Hi today I am going to share with you what I have been doing in HR.
Were making a story about this photo, the photo has a man, a car and a bear, and the description is humour.
I found it hard to think of the bears personalty.
I figured it would be easy to make the story cause I like writing fiction story's.
If you have any feed back about what i should improve please comment it.
Here the Photo:


Heres my work:

Some people say you should run when you see a bear but not this guy.
But if you're me you would see a regular person but really big and fluffy.
As I go up to him he starts going the other way around the car, like we're playing a game.
All I want is to put him back in his car seat.
Bear: “You can't make me do anything,” 
Guy: “You sure?”
Bear: “Pretty sure you can't stop me” 
Guy: “Ok
Bear: starts Running around the car again to make the guy puffed.

So enough he gets in the car.

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