Bad Behavior should be Banned

Today In Writing we had to do a Persuade Writing, I found it easy to think of the title. I found It hard to do the paragraphs.

I will be discussing the reason why Bad Behavior should be Banned.

In my opinion,children should not be allowed to say swear to anyone, not even there friends.

The most important reason is that after school, you would have a child, that would be all mad and not what to go to school. And It is the most thing I hear when I go to pick up my child, and even the smallest word can be powerful.

Another point is that children, have a whole life to follow and are role models to the little ones. And now they are going to swear when they are older. 

Finally, everyone behavior should be positive no matter what. Because when they are older they will not now some of the over stuff.

I therefore believe that no school should let people swear in school. Or even after school, with my child she will not be allowed to swear, until she is 11 years old.