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Friday, 16 August 2019

Mr.Frosty



Freezing, I said to myself.
Then my mum said ¨ Time to get up¨ so I count up to 10 then I got up .
And got ready.
After I had breakfast.
My mum said ¨get up Carla and Jay¨ with an anger voice.
Now Carla and Jay are anger and In a mood.
10 min later.
We are that school we are all cooled.
Now just all doring school.
Work well not all of It Is doring. At morning tea.
Carla, Aone, Isabella, Rarika, Angela and Me went, on the field and made our heads all freeze up.
Aone, Isabella, Rarika and Angela, are my friend
like we have know control of our body.
Next Day.
It was just as bad as yesterday, but not as bad.
Now I still feel blistering cold.
As we get to school I hear The grass crushing, when I walk I on It.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Teagen
    I like the sort story you made. Maybe next time you could add less ands and then in the story and reread it and a quality blog post.

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